Comments for BMO Mosaik Mastercard http://vmedialab.org BMO Mosaik Mastercard Mon, 16 May 2011 08:05:16 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0.1 Comment on Q&A: Could you check my gramatical mistakes? by Gv http://vmedialab.org/qa-could-you-check-my-gramatical-mistakes/#comment-1469 Gv Mon, 16 May 2011 08:05:16 +0000 http://vmedialab.org/qa-could-you-check-my-gramatical-mistakes/#comment-1469 4th line : should be 'his or her training' and qualification that the particular person already has.- does not require 'that the particular person already has'- just stop with qualification. 5th line end :skills and equpments 6th line : 'a particular task' or else 'particular tasks' 7th line : these not theses 10th line : upcoming months , following months or next few months 12th line : needed instead of need 4th line : should be ‘his or her training’
and qualification that the particular person already has.- does not require ‘that the particular person already has’- just stop with qualification.
5th line end :skills and equpments
6th line : ‘a particular task’ or else ‘particular tasks’
7th line : these not theses
10th line : upcoming months , following months or next few months
12th line : needed instead of need

]]> Comment on Q&A: Could you check my gramatical mistakes? by Allora http://vmedialab.org/qa-could-you-check-my-gramatical-mistakes/#comment-1468 Allora Mon, 16 May 2011 07:26:40 +0000 http://vmedialab.org/qa-could-you-check-my-gramatical-mistakes/#comment-1468 There were quite a few mistakes, I have rewritten it below. "Skills Requirement In business, the labour force uses their skills to complete their work and tasks. Measuring the skills of current workforce is a very important part of human resources planning. It helps the business to build up a profile of each individual worker and their previous training, experience and qualifications. If the nature of work changes, the skill and equipment which is needed to do a particular task may change as well. Some employees may not be able to fit into the workforce and adapt to these changes, so an extra training program may be needed to help them. Some organisations that need to rapidly adapt to changes, like banks, may need to plan for the next few months or even years. Chester Zoo must make sure that they measure the skill level of their workforce and plan for any future training or recruitment that may be needed in the future to operate and meet their goals." There were quite a few mistakes, I have rewritten it below.

“Skills Requirement
In business, the labour force uses their skills to complete their work and tasks. Measuring the skills of current workforce is a very important part of human resources planning. It helps the business to build up a profile of each individual worker and their previous training, experience and qualifications. If the nature of work changes, the skill and equipment which is needed to do a particular task may change as well. Some employees may not be able to fit into the workforce and adapt to these changes, so an extra training program may be needed to help them. Some organisations that need to rapidly adapt to changes, like banks, may need to plan for the next few months or even years.

Chester Zoo must make sure that they measure the skill level of their workforce and plan for any future training or recruitment that may be needed in the future to operate and meet their goals.”

]]> Comment on Q&A: Could you check my gramatical mistakes? by <3 http://vmedialab.org/qa-could-you-check-my-gramatical-mistakes/#comment-1467 <3 Mon, 16 May 2011 07:00:14 +0000 http://vmedialab.org/qa-could-you-check-my-gramatical-mistakes/#comment-1467 Skills Requirement In the business, labor *force *use their skills to complete their work and tasks. Measuring the skills of current workforce is a very important part of human resources planning. It helps the business to build up a profile of each individual worker and her or his training, experience,* and qualification that the particular person already has. If the nature of work changes, the skills equipments,* which are needed to do a particular task* may change as well. Some employees may not be able to fit into the workforce and *adapt to *these changes, so an extra training program may be needed to help them. Some *organizations that must rapidly adapt to changes, like banks, may need to plan for the next months or even years. Chester Zoo must make sure that they measure the *skill level of *their workforce and plan for any future training or recruitment that may be *needed in the future to operate and meet their goals. I corrected some of the words, & changed some of them, & I added some missing punctuation too. Skills Requirement
In the business, labor *force *use their skills to complete their work and tasks. Measuring the skills of current workforce is a very important part of human resources planning. It helps the business to build up a profile of each individual worker and her or his training, experience,* and qualification that the particular person already has. If the nature of work changes, the skills equipments,* which are needed to do a particular task* may change as well. Some employees may not be able to fit into the workforce and *adapt to *these changes, so an extra training program may be needed to help them. Some *organizations that must rapidly adapt to changes, like banks, may need to plan for the next months or even years.

Chester Zoo must make sure that they measure the *skill level of *their workforce and plan for any future training or recruitment that may be *needed in the future to operate and meet their goals.

I corrected some of the words, & changed some of them, & I added some missing punctuation too.

]]> Comment on Q&A: Could you check my gramatical mistakes? by John http://vmedialab.org/qa-could-you-check-my-gramatical-mistakes/#comment-1466 John Mon, 16 May 2011 06:54:07 +0000 http://vmedialab.org/qa-could-you-check-my-gramatical-mistakes/#comment-1466 Chester Zoo must make sure that they measure the skills level of its workforce - skills should be skill and its should be it's Chester Zoo must make sure that they measure the skills level of its workforce – skills should be skill and its should be it’s

]]> Comment on Would she regret and remember me in all i did for her on Valentines day and on Christmas day ? by Mystery Lady http://vmedialab.org/would-she-regret-and-remember-me-in-all-i-did-for-her-on-valentines-day-and-on-christmas-day/#comment-1453 Mystery Lady Sun, 15 May 2011 15:17:12 +0000 http://vmedialab.org/would-she-regret-and-remember-me-in-all-i-did-for-her-on-valentines-day-and-on-christmas-day/#comment-1453 awww poor guy. Your actions were by definition, 'love'. i really admire how much care you showed to this girl, and I am sorry that she had left you. Personally I would find it hard to. Although u can't get her back, I am certain you can find another love, as hard as it may seem. Since I think love can happen more than once and is just a matter of chance awww poor guy. Your actions were by definition, ‘love’. i really admire how much care you showed to this girl, and I am sorry that she had left you. Personally I would find it hard to. Although u can’t get her back, I am certain you can find another love, as hard as it may seem. Since I think love can happen more than once and is just a matter of chance

]]> Comment on Would she regret and remember me in all i did for her on Valentines day and on Christmas day ? by Albanian-Princess http://vmedialab.org/would-she-regret-and-remember-me-in-all-i-did-for-her-on-valentines-day-and-on-christmas-day/#comment-1452 Albanian-Princess Sun, 15 May 2011 15:14:51 +0000 http://vmedialab.org/would-she-regret-and-remember-me-in-all-i-did-for-her-on-valentines-day-and-on-christmas-day/#comment-1452 Wow Theres not many guys like yu. i think she was a bit stupid for dumping yu, yu seem pretty nice from what im hearing. Maybe yu was doing too much for her i think yu shuld of backed of a little bit, but i think that she will regret it 1 day and shell relise that she probably cant find no one like you. And you should move on and find some one who deserves you :) Wow
Theres not many guys like yu.
i think she was a bit stupid for dumping yu, yu seem pretty nice from what im hearing. Maybe yu was doing too much for her i think yu shuld of backed of a little bit, but i think that she will regret it 1 day and shell relise that she probably cant find no one like you.

And you should move on and find some one who deserves you :)

]]> Comment on Have you been on TV? Or to an event that was filmed or broadcast? Were cameras intrusive? Or add to the fun? by dbarnes1963@sbcglobal.net http://vmedialab.org/have-you-been-on-tv-or-to-an-event-that-was-filmed-or-broadcast-were-cameras-intrusive-or-add-to-the-fun/#comment-1442 dbarnes1963@sbcglobal.net Sun, 15 May 2011 04:46:26 +0000 http://vmedialab.org/have-you-been-on-tv-or-to-an-event-that-was-filmed-or-broadcast-were-cameras-intrusive-or-add-to-the-fun/#comment-1442 I was an extra in "The Problem Child" with John Ritter & Michael Richards. I was also a stunt man and I was in the stage play "Dark of the Moon" with Lou Diamond Phillips! Does this count? I am related to John Wayne! I was an extra in “The Problem Child” with John Ritter & Michael Richards. I was also a stunt man and I was in the stage play “Dark of the Moon” with Lou Diamond Phillips!

Does this count? I am related to John Wayne!

]]> Comment on Have you been on TV? Or to an event that was filmed or broadcast? Were cameras intrusive? Or add to the fun? by Top Gear Fan! http://vmedialab.org/have-you-been-on-tv-or-to-an-event-that-was-filmed-or-broadcast-were-cameras-intrusive-or-add-to-the-fun/#comment-1441 Top Gear Fan! Sun, 15 May 2011 03:53:38 +0000 http://vmedialab.org/have-you-been-on-tv-or-to-an-event-that-was-filmed-or-broadcast-were-cameras-intrusive-or-add-to-the-fun/#comment-1441 Yes I was in blackpool watching the tractor pulling and the camera zoomed past us so quickly but when we paused it, it filmed us. :) Yes I was in blackpool watching the tractor pulling and the camera zoomed past us so quickly but when we paused it, it filmed us. :)

]]> Comment on Have you been on TV? Or to an event that was filmed or broadcast? Were cameras intrusive? Or add to the fun? by ╔═Tris═╝ http://vmedialab.org/have-you-been-on-tv-or-to-an-event-that-was-filmed-or-broadcast-were-cameras-intrusive-or-add-to-the-fun/#comment-1440 ╔═Tris═╝ Sun, 15 May 2011 03:05:53 +0000 http://vmedialab.org/have-you-been-on-tv-or-to-an-event-that-was-filmed-or-broadcast-were-cameras-intrusive-or-add-to-the-fun/#comment-1440 Yes, quite a few times, but only 3 times when talking, and they are Welsh programmes. First time it was my birthday and I was on one of them birthday wishes things that you have on toddler programmes and i was 1. I've been on about four episodes of 'Stamina', a Welsh programme to do with sports, another is 'Popty' which is another Welsh programme i've been twice on... to do with music. I've been on the quiz panel a couple of times on that show and got an iPod shuffle... twice. Hopefully throughout the year ill get chances to be in other programmes as i have just joined an agency! But knowin' my luck... nothin special will crop up... Yes, quite a few times, but only 3 times when talking, and they are Welsh programmes. First time it was my birthday and I was on one of them birthday wishes things that you have on toddler programmes and i was 1. I’ve been on about four episodes of ‘Stamina’, a Welsh programme to do with sports, another is ‘Popty’ which is another Welsh programme i’ve been twice on… to do with music. I’ve been on the quiz panel a couple of times on that show and got an iPod shuffle… twice. Hopefully throughout the year ill get chances to be in other programmes as i have just joined an agency! But knowin’ my luck… nothin special will crop up…

]]> Comment on Have you been on TV? Or to an event that was filmed or broadcast? Were cameras intrusive? Or add to the fun? by elsie55 http://vmedialab.org/have-you-been-on-tv-or-to-an-event-that-was-filmed-or-broadcast-were-cameras-intrusive-or-add-to-the-fun/#comment-1439 elsie55 Sun, 15 May 2011 02:37:44 +0000 http://vmedialab.org/have-you-been-on-tv-or-to-an-event-that-was-filmed-or-broadcast-were-cameras-intrusive-or-add-to-the-fun/#comment-1439 A few times. Most recently last night on the news in the Midlands when there was a celebration of the 200th anniversary of Charles Darwins birth in Shrewsbury. I was dressed in period costume and providing "background colour". I have been Songs of praise twice last year. When I lived in Canada I was on T.V. a couple of times when I worked in radio. I didn't let the cameras interfere with what I was doing .. just carried on as though they were not there. A few times.
Most recently last night on the news in the Midlands when there was a celebration of the 200th anniversary of Charles Darwins birth in Shrewsbury. I was dressed in period costume and providing “background colour”.
I have been Songs of praise twice last year.
When I lived in Canada I was on T.V. a couple of times when I worked in radio.
I didn’t let the cameras interfere with what I was doing .. just carried on as though they were not there.

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